tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7199796958293321265.post265351975031949572..comments2024-01-22T20:42:32.525-08:00Comments on Resources for Writers: Don't Lecture Your ReadersJodie Rennerhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17180607353893233389noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7199796958293321265.post-85246700550699591702012-07-09T12:40:27.583-07:002012-07-09T12:40:27.583-07:00I like this post but I am in the middle of a WIP w...I like this post but I am in the middle of a WIP where I have had to commit some of this. I can only solve it with lively interaction instead of exposition, because of the setting. The realizations and revelations are directly relevant to the story and move the plot. I have spread out the process of discovery, but I have a couple scenes of dialogue cluster, so that I can blow through a lot of points in a short time, instead of fabricating endless situations to bring about more spread-out dialogue. I have also streamlined/eliminated some of my points. I will revisit some of these clusters and see if I can make sure that they do not take the reader out of the setting.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com